Acorn’s and shiny leaves fall Under trees I walk and crunch leaves. Trees are getting old, leaves are small and trees are getting tall. Under my feet are crunchy leaves. March the 1st is when autumn starts Near me are beautiful leaves and old trees.
Hello Bailey! My name is Hannah I am a year 7 from Ahipara School. I loved how you described Autumn I felt like I was there in the poem because you used some good words, I love Autumn. Bye from Hannah!
Hello Bailey,
ReplyDeleteI really like the poem you posted about autumn! I also love the adjectives you used, I reminds me a lot like autumn!
Keep Up the Great work!!
-Uinita
Your peom sounds great, you got rhymes in your autumn poem too. Do you like Autumn or Spring?
ReplyDeleteAmazing work.
-Dwyane
Hi Bailey
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem about Autumn, I really enjoyed reading it keep up the good work
Hello Bailey! My name is Hannah I am a year 7 from Ahipara School. I loved how you described Autumn I felt like I was there in the poem because you used some good words, I love Autumn. Bye from Hannah!
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